Retirement in The Villages, FL

How Important Are Proofreaders? Very! Read Their Review Points. You’ll See.

Number of points & scope greatly exceeded my expectations. We disagree on two grammar points. Before/After examples selectively scannable.

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This article shows one of those ideas in action:
===> Use independent proofreaders.

They made 102 unique suggestions

You can scan down through this article to see their critiques and review the examples that interest you, starting at the following line:= = = = = Critiques & Examples = = Selectively Readable = = = =

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There is no Cat II article due to Medium duplication rules. The original title and publication date remain unchanged.

Introduction

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Managing a cat is not an easy task

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The cat shows itself

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Fired for being a cat

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Productivity — a cat will try anything

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Leveraging the cat — making deals

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The cat’s project time estimate

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The cat’s concept of time

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The cat’s outside supporters

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The cat brings his own toys

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A focused, meticulous cat

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Thinking like a cat

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Ignored by the cat

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Once a cat, always a cat

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Is the cat really lazy?

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The kitten — early signs

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Conclusion

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William “Bill” Myers, Analyzes all, Programmer, retired. If you learn anything new, find enjoyment, have a new thought, then I’m successful. Photo: 1st article

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